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Rapture

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I just want to make you smile,
Have you truly done so in a while?
Fear of losing what I've gained,
After this will you still be the same?
Your laughter is what I love to hear,
Why can't your answers be so clear?
Darkness constantly pains your mind,
Do I lose a piece of you each and every time?

Let me caress you in my arms,
Hold you high beyond their harm.
My wings will carry us away,
Distant from this world of pain.
Our love will take us high above the clouds,
Where "I love you" is the only sound…

I just want to make you strong,
Will you put behind all of the wrongs?
Nightmares always cause your fall,
Do I catch you when you hear me call?
Every day I fear your change,
Why does your life need to rearrange?
Ghosts of your past release their haunting,
Do I help rid them, or am I only taunting?

Let me lose myself in your eyes,
See the passion deep inside.
We'll let our hearts entwine as one,
Sentient for what's to come.
Our souls will shine with a radiant light,
For us together is only in sight…
NOTICE: As of 6/4/2010 at 4:43 AM, This poem has been revised.

My 22nd Poem...

I decided to try something a little different... Its kinda a work in progress... but i liked where it was going at this point. I'm still in the process of writing it... so more will probably be added. I guess you could call it a preview...

I hope you like it. Any comments, questions, or suggestions are welcome. ^.^

For :heart::iconcarmen16::heart:

Revision: 6/4/2010 at 4:43 AM

I added two more stanzas on the end... it just seemed like there needed to be more, and I had more to write, so I added it. I hope I made it better not worse...

Still for :heart::iconcarmen16::heart:
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Lady-Maaka's avatar
such lovley stuff here ^^
sorry lol im not very good with my words